Cycle – a Haiku

Cycle

 

Roots absorb the dead,

Build the trunk and feed the leaves,

Which fall on my head.

 

By Shay ryan

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18 Responses to Cycle – a Haiku

  1. Pingback: Cycle – a Haiku | Words in rhythm

  2. brian miller says:

    yeah, its a cycle…life/death…in trees…and life…

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  3. billgncs says:

    I wonder what the trees know, or think of us in this cycle which is so short to them.

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  4. Yes!! So true and beautifully written. 🙂

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  5. the contrast of the last sentence.. very nice.. haiku for circle of life works so well..

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  6. kelvin s.m. says:

    …ah, i can feel that falling… lovely observations… smiles…

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  7. Mohana says:

    ah! the cycle of life and death. fine haiku.

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  8. claudia says:

    so much depends on the roots…a cycle of building and feeding and budding and falling…just like life..

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  9. Misky says:

    Like a wheel turning…

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  10. poetrypea says:

    Great haiku

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